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Arab World English Journal (AWEJ) Volume 16. Number 2, June 2025 Pp.116-135
Center for Research in Language and Linguistics,
Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia, Malaysia
Center for Research in Language and Linguistics,
Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia, Malaysia
Center for Research in Language and Linguistics,
Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia, Malaysia
Department of English Language and Literature,
Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
This study examined how writing anxiety and genre affect writing performance in group difference analysis among intermediate EFL learners in China, based on Hayes’s revised writing model. Writing performance was assessed using measures of syntactic and lexical complexity, accuracy, and fluency. Using the Second Language Writing Anxiety Inventory, a total of 104 intermediate EFL students were categorized into high- and low-anxiety groups. Participants wrote both argumentative and narrative essays, analyzed with the second language (L2) Syntactic Complexity Analyzer, Lexical Complexity Analyzer, Grammarly Premium, and manual error coding following Polio and Shea’s guidelines. Mixed analyses of variance and t-tests revealed significant impacts of writing anxiety on complexity and fluency, and genre effects on all complexity, accuracy, and fluency, except for interaction effects. These results highlight significant variations in performance due to anxiety and essay type, supporting Skehan’s Limited Attention Capacity hypothesis and Biber and Conrad’s functional explanations. The findings advocate tailored pedagogical strategies to reduce anxiety in EFL genre-specific writing and improve educational outcomes.
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Tian Guo is a PhD candidate at the Center for Research in Language and Linguistics, FSSK, UKM. Her research interests lie in psychological linguistics, L2 writing, and second language acquisition (SLA). ORCID: https://orcid.org/0009-0006-7714-4362
Afendi Hamat (PhD) is an associate professor at the Center for Research in Language and Linguistics, FSSK, UKM and the current head of Digital Humanities Research Group at PKBL. His research areas are intersections between technology and humanities such as social media, e-learning, and artificial intelligence. ORCID: https://orcid.org/0000-0003-2060-9203
Nurjanah Mohd Jaafar (PhD) is a lecturer at the Centre for Research in Language and Linguistics, FSSK, UKM. She is the coordinator of the center’s eye-tracking laboratory. Her research focuses on the use of representations (especially text and graphics) in learning by second language speakers. ORCID: https://orcid.org/0000-0002-8438-0033
Guo Zhang is a PhD candidate at the Department of English Language and Literature, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China. Her research interests lie in interpretation, interpretation teaching, and language & linguistics.
ORCID: https://orcid.org/0009-0005-1638-3768